How is this five line valentine day poem please leave your comment?


Birth is thus
death is thus
valentine day
or naught
why so much fuss.





February 8, 2010 at 11:49 pm

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February 9, 2010

By maddamselfly *musing*

Exactly! Sympatho.Synaisthimatismous I went out the window with my migraine today. . You summed nice! Even though some might say that is redundant or not rhyme. .. .

By tichur

Lack of punctuation, capitalization, consistent effect, and the feeling of love that makes zero effort.

By Emily C

I like it; It was yours to begin with;)

well, birth, death, Valentine Day and bustle. . . . What the heck is all this fuss about this noise. . . .:) amir

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